Reviews for Save Your Breath
Delete Name chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
:( That's sad. *starts sniffing*

The form, the structure, the flow and everything (including mood) were spot on, although it did get a bit choppy towards the end. An usual mistake.

VoicesOfViolence chapter 1 . 10/26/2003
That's a very sweet, sad poem. Beautifully written.
jingjing chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
*sniffsniff* its so sad...*blows nose*...*regains composure and quiety applauds*