|Reviews for Fly Away|
| Jezebel Malice chapter 1 . 11/7/2003
i also thought ths poem was lovely
it shows things i wish i knew hwo to express...it was so good i wish it was mine!
| coldslit chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
it was a little repetative, but it was pretty good.
you really get a senser of what the poem was about- its really sad when you think of it- getting someone else out of a slump, yet being unable to help yourself out of it, and as a result digging yourself deeper in
i liked the wings metaphor of it
| Fabala33 chapter 1 . 10/26/2003
I love this! Your poetry is so good! Add more soon!
| Eirthe Rose Crystal chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
Another wonderful poem. I especially like this one. Even the summary manages to just grab the reader's attention. _ I commend the great talent that you've shown in this poem. Keep it up. '-,- Eirthe Rose Crystal