bubbly preppy chicks scare me sits in the fetal position sucking his thumb

good

this is very reality-based. I see people like this every day in my life. Its a nice change from the fantasy stuff ive been reading lately.

~shauna

Hey this is good. I'm hoping nothing bad happens to the girls. I can see something developing between Rosie and Michaela. I'd say they are my favourite characters too at the moment.

Keep writing!

That was good. Interesting.