|Reviews for Love|
| the word wielder chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
Short, to the point.
And very enjoyable.
Very good work :)
| Ayx chapter 1 . 2/5/2004
Some How I understand this poem on a more personal level as if it were in my own writing
| IHJ chapter 1 . 10/26/2003
Constructive criticism coming. A haiku is 3 lines, with the syllabic count being 5-7-5. Your poem isn't a haiku, but I'm sure with some tweaking, it could be one. It's kinda cute.
| Blasphemequarantine chapter 1 . 10/26/2003
An haiku is a 3 line verse with 5-7-5 syllables respectively. 17 syllables.
It has 18 syllables, so I'd say its clsoe enough.
Yes, pretty much captured love here, and I do beleive it is that simple.
| xyellx chapter 1 . 10/26/2003
Doesn't a haiku only have three lines?