I wish this was longer. It's beautiful and gives me sort of a shiver down my spine. Very nice.

*Clarie*

Oh, I really like this.

I don't even know why...there is just something so ominous about it that makes it cool.

Nice work! Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw

Love the title of this, it really made me want to read the poem.

Short, and a little abstract... the opening line was my favourite, it was just very good.

Mia