Reviews for Crystal Moments
gaga19 chapter 12 . 12/25/2011
Sorry, but i gotta ask she stupid or something? Molly's very inconsistent in her actions. She decides one thing then does the complete opposite and if i were attached to this character I'd be really frustrated right now.
BaleighTheMadQueen chapter 20 . 8/9/2010
I just LOVE this story, love it! I wish there was a button that said 'I love this story so read it you lazy bums' but sadly there isn't. If there was I'd click it right now. But I need to get one thing straight. What does she look like? I couldn't really understand . . .
Novella Vialli chapter 20 . 4/25/2010
I loved it. I'm a total sucker for the whole 'president's child falls for someone...'!
FictionismyGame chapter 20 . 11/22/2009
This is really good, gives me inspiration to go out and go the White House. I want my own President's son! Lol. Well, I see why you reference Meg Cabot, it is alot like her story All-American Girl. (I hope that was the right one, because I'm a big fan of hers too, but I just took that off the top of my memory.) But this story is good in its own way too. Love the ending too, it's perfect. And before I end this, I have one more thing to say. You have a thing for chocolate-covered celebrities, don't you?
FictionismyGame chapter 15 . 11/22/2009
This story is really awesome, I love it. Except, is suddenty a word? I'm sorry but it sounds so weird! But I'm going to feel like a real dork if it turns out it's in the dictionary and all that...Never mind, forget I said anything. :)
FictionismyGame chapter 7 . 11/22/2009
this is so good. it's so funny. but can you really have a GPA of 12? Because I thought that each A4 pts, B3 pts, C2 pts, D1 pts, and F0 pts. Then you add your four major grades together (math, science, history, and lanuage arts or english conventions) and divide by 4. So, for example, if you have all A's, you have a 4.0.
sarcasm is my middle name chapter 20 . 4/15/2009
Wow... all i can say is wow (which when you think about it is pretty pathetic)

Great story, i love it!
HelgaBertoni chapter 20 . 3/22/2009
Loved it!
XxSiennaxX chapter 14 . 11/4/2008
Hey :)

I'm over half way through reading your novel. I really love it. The text flows really well and it's so romantic and exciting. One little thing that I can't help but comment on in this chapter "biggest QUEEN-sized bed I’d ever seen" - O.k. How can you have a big Queen sized, it's either queen sized or not.

Anyways, that's rather unimportant

Love this story

I Murder on Impulse chapter 20 . 9/22/2008

christinaxxyo chapter 20 . 6/5/2008
Wow lol. That was pretty good. Nice job :)
christinaxxyo chapter 5 . 6/5/2008
In the first chapter you said she had a twin sister. She still hasn't shown up and you make it sound like she's an only child so you might want to fix that.
christinaxxyo chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
I liked it but what's with those random gaps?
Daddy's Little Angel chapter 9 . 5/25/2008
this story is so cool! I love it.
Maxegirl1313 chapter 5 . 5/4/2008
Hhahaha i love it XD
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