Sorry, but i gotta ask this..is she stupid or something? Molly's very inconsistent in her actions. She decides one thing then does the complete opposite and if i were attached to this character I'd be really frustrated right now.

I just LOVE this story, love it! I wish there was a button that said 'I love this story so read it you lazy bums' but sadly there isn't. If there was I'd click it right now. But I need to get one thing straight. What does she look like? I couldn't really understand . . .

I loved it. I'm a total sucker for the whole 'president's child falls for someone...'!

This is really good, gives me inspiration to go out and go the White House. I want my own President's son! Lol. Well, I see why you reference Meg Cabot, it is alot like her story All-American Girl. (I hope that was the right one, because I'm a big fan of hers too, but I just took that off the top of my memory.) But this story is good in its own way too. Love the ending too, it's perfect. And before I end this, I have one more thing to say. You have a thing for chocolate-covered celebrities, don't you?

This story is really awesome, I love it. Except, is suddenty a word? I'm sorry but it sounds so weird! But I'm going to feel like a real dork if it turns out it's in the dictionary and all that...Never mind, forget I said anything. :)

this is so good. it's so funny. but can you really have a GPA of 12? Because I thought that each A4 pts, B3 pts, C2 pts, D1 pts, and F0 pts. Then you add your four major grades together (math, science, history, and lanuage arts or english conventions) and divide by 4. So, for example, if you have all A's, you have a 4.0.

Wow... all i can say is wow (which when you think about it is pretty pathetic)

Great story, i love it!

Loved it!

Hey :)

I'm over half way through reading your novel. I really love it. The text flows really well and it's so romantic and exciting. One little thing that I can't help but comment on in this chapter "biggest QUEEN-sized bed I’d ever seen" - O.k. How can you have a big Queen sized, it's either queen sized or not.

Anyways, that's rather unimportant

Love this story

:D

BRILLIANT STORY!

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Wow lol. That was pretty good. Nice job :)

In the first chapter you said she had a twin sister. She still hasn't shown up and you make it sound like she's an only child so you might want to fix that.

I liked it but what's with those random gaps?

this story is so cool! I love it.

Hhahaha i love it XD