Reviews for Guilty
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
This is a good poem but the title really doesn't suit it. You're not guilty for anything. I think a different title would be more appropriate cuz there's nothing in this about guilt. Maybe "Unfortunately Fortunate" would be a better title? Great poem tho!
pippin tomson chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
You're right, I feel that too, but you have to remember that you've been given opportunities, proving grateful, you should use them, maybe you can give others more then, so they are more fortunate. thats how I look round it.
PainKiller chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
Very powerful... Second stanza was excellent. Great final line.
Ian chapter 1 . 10/26/2003
this is good, and so very true, its really sad. Some are just luckeir then others, but they should at least try and enjoy what tey are given, if you dont you are giving uop something so many people want but dont have. Love ya, you are very sweet person, you must be, not many people care about others that have nothing.