Reviews for Believe
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 10/31/2003
That was really a work of sheer beauty.

~Heart of the Sword
az2328 chapter 1 . 10/29/2003
wow! i love this so much! 'for the faith that yearns to live/../as long as i believe' this is amazing. you rock!
Star-Gir1 chapter 1 . 10/28/2003
Amazing! I
Sunflower Philosophy chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
*stares avidly* Wow. That was really, really, beautifully written! I especially loved the lines "Voices taunt my mind with fear/'I almost had it all'", "On bended knee, Oh mighty Sun/Please lend me one more ray" and "Uncloud my darkened day"- great alliteration in that one. Loved the end, too. Magnificent job!

m~* Sunflower, anyone?
Jess Angel chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
Simply beautiful and inspiring. I love the comparisons with the sun, rain, and clouds. Something I can relate to. Lovely work.

Write on matey!

Jess 0:o)
Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
Incredible poem, absolutely beautiful... I love it.

"On bended knee, Oh mighty Sun

Please lend me one more ray

Let not your anger move your heart

Uncloud my darkened day"

Brilliant lines, they stuck with me all throughout the poem, and they're probably my favorites lines out of all the poems I've read. Great work.. keep it up.
CurlyKaye chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
What a beautiful way to demonstrate the power and love of Christ! Amazingly beautiful!

God Bless You!