Reviews for Believe |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was really a work of sheer beauty. ~Heart of the Sword |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! i love this so much! 'for the faith that yearns to live/../as long as i believe' this is amazing. you rock! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() *stares avidly* Wow. That was really, really, beautifully written! I especially loved the lines "Voices taunt my mind with fear/'I almost had it all'", "On bended knee, Oh mighty Sun/Please lend me one more ray" and "Uncloud my darkened day"- great alliteration in that one. Loved the end, too. Magnificent job! m~* Sunflower, anyone? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simply beautiful and inspiring. I love the comparisons with the sun, rain, and clouds. Something I can relate to. Lovely work. Write on matey! Jess 0:o) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Incredible poem, absolutely beautiful... I love it. "On bended knee, Oh mighty Sun Please lend me one more ray Let not your anger move your heart Uncloud my darkened day" Brilliant lines, they stuck with me all throughout the poem, and they're probably my favorites lines out of all the poems I've read. Great work.. keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a beautiful way to demonstrate the power and love of Christ! Amazingly beautiful! God Bless You! CurlyKaye |