Reviews for Autumnal Exposure
Tenika D chapter 1 . 2/19/2004
Wow, that's . . . Wow! *blinks* Very, very good - I love seasonal poetry. You're really very talented with non-rhyming poetry - I've been trying my hand at it lately, and it's harder than it looks! I commend you.
Tenika Dargan
SerAnonima chapter 1 . 11/21/2003
Beautifully written as always... beautiful... amazing imagery and language...
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 11/2/2003
Autumn's one of my favorite seasons as well. But it's usually so cold here in Canada already in Autumn time but oh well hehe it's a shame that it does not last too long because all thoese pretty leaves fall off of the trees *sigh* but everything must come to an end huh? Good poem darling, gorgeous imagery.

*Jenna*
Miamouse chapter 1 . 10/28/2003
God, I love autmnal poems... one of the best I've read this year, methinks.

My fave parts were:

'Leaves cleave apart the time we had together'

and

'Dog-ear our page and see the season fade,

away into a Autumn sunset of blue and grey.'

Beautiful.

Mia
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
I love flal too... great imagery... autumnal...great wor.. me likie!
Punky Monkey chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
This is good i enjoyed reading it. I like the imagery you use. Autums my fave season too :D Keep writing.
katyruth chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
nice! i like the end a lot, and the the description of dog-eared pages. great poem. keep writing!