|Reviews for All Year Round|
| CaramelCream chapter 1 . 1/16/2004
Letter form author:
Sorry if the n-word offends people but I dont use it out of disrespect. I use it as the slang. Only that. Why would I disrespect my people?
| NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDolly chapter 1 . 1/9/2004
It wasn't bad, didn't mind it.. I just hate the word "nigger" That's just my opinion though.
| KawaiiCookie chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
I like the whole great big metaphor thing- I haven't seen it done before, good work!
I also liked the voice you put it in; that's not done often either. )
"With my clique
Our blood runs thick
A second family
The first just ain't for me."
"Fall is here
That shit is clear
True colors start to bear
Why did my friends disappear?"
((Oh! Four rhyming words in a row! Bravo!))
Yay yay yay! Keep it up!