Reviews for Paranoia
NiteSkyStar chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
I love this! Very powerful and very moving. This is strong stuff. Keep up the awesome work! You're a fantastic writer.

januaryisforever chapter 1 . 10/28/2003
Woww... ::applause:: You've been listening to Imaginary, haven't you? :B Good CD, eh? Spiffy poem. It's not in standard form, which makes it UBER-cool. ;) I love the little words you popped in at the end. They add a nice effect. Keep writing - hope you get better soon!

::cowers from purple chainsaw-elephants::
evm chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
Whee! Fun! I love! I like your new style, so inventive! You should name it( the style)! Finally you've writen a poem with your own muse and not andrea's stolen one! This poem sound more like what you usally write. I like!
Saranha de Angelo chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
Honesty time...somehow to me the purple elephants didn't seem to fit with the seriousness of the story, but if that's what you were thinking when you wrote it, what do I know? I can't write poetry! Wee! Anyway, I like it, and I like how you insert sets of one word draws your attention. Coolioifigo...
pieces chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
Truly inspired, and slightly humorous. You have an amazing talent.