Reviews for No real title
IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 12/13/2003
I love it! You write so well!
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
I think the line "Well even if I am a book, Then you are too" is kinda out of place. Cuz in the verse before that u talk about how this person is NOT a book and then you say "well even if I am a book..." as if they're admitting they are a book. I just don't think it fits very well. But I love the verse "All you ever do is hurt people

Since you're insecure

And you act like your sophisticated

But you're comments are immature"

Very true. Great poem, real eye-opener.
Punky Monkey chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
Love the poem maybe the title could be 'im nothing at all' taken from the first paragraph.
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
Very good. I like it.


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Mime chapter 1 . 10/31/2003
Titles...hmm...*ponders a bit* Well, what I like about this piece is how you compare humans to maybe your title could be another metaphor or something. Anyway, awesome work!
estrela chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
i really like the rhyming. you capture the emotions. love it!
unwritten chapter 1 . 10/29/2003
i really like it, nice rhyming. i think everyone can relate to what this says. as for a title something like your weapons of words, i don't know.
Ian chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
This is well done. The title could be Tease or Ignore maybe