Cute, sad story. I like the way it's written. I think you could go a bit deeper, perhaps, if you wanted to, with the story-behind-the-story; the foxes becoming extinct, that sort of thing. I like the idea of an experimental animal to save the others; do you know if it's been tried before, altering the genes or whatever? If it would work, it would be a great way to say so many species! Thanks for reviewing my poetry!

wonderful story. so sad, but sweet. beautifully written, profound and touching piece. i like this. good work. keep it up!

Hm. You and I seem to share the same fascination with foxes.
This is well written, and I like the journal titles. They give the reader an idea of what time it is rather than wasting a lot of time in 'days passed...' etc. The ending was a tad upon the sappy side, but overall, I liked this.

I liked the ideas and the way you wrote it, but parts of it were unrealistic. I think it would be helpful if you studied more, too, before writing something else like; alot of your attempts at medical criteria were distracting in thier impossiblity. . .

Very nice. I really liked it. It seemed very emotional and real, and I really liked the fox. It was sad, but sort of a bittersweetness to the ending brought it all together. Good job!

*Sniff..sniff*

So.. So sad

WAHH!

Heh.

Anyhoo.

A good story. Very, very touching. Makes me wanna cry...

Anyway, it really was very good. The doctor is just a little bit unrealistic in how much he gets attatched to Ursa. And some of the scenes are a bit too heavy and even a little sappy at times. But, all in all, a nice little story. I liked the way that you described Ursa, while never describing the humans at all. It had a good environmental message, and the wording was powerful.

Good story. Keep it up.

_Ahrar

It was so wonderful, it made me want to cry. You can tell that there was a certain amount of research put into it.

The only thing that bothered me was the quick transitions between journals and points of view. It got slightly confusing, but didn't take away from the story.

Wow, what can I say...I like it.

I usually try to nit-pick a little. But your story is great.

The only thing I can think of, would be a deeper look into the ethics of the situation. A stronger note of dispair about changing the original to save it, maybe an echo into our own lives.

Keep up the good work.