|Reviews for Not To Be Human|
| Draith chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
Dark poet's vice rewarded twice! Another great poem regarding the darkner things of life. It strikes me nearly as the type of string that could work nicely as a chorus to a song that elaborates on this thought. I like it as a short piece by itself though, as it really touches nicely on the thought!
Love your writing style!
| AvaRicE chapter 1 . 10/28/2003
I love this poem - I can relate to it more than I want to admit _
Only nitpicks are the last two lines... try not to use slang/web abbrieviations.