Reviews for Finally Insane
kemushi caterpillar chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
wow, lily-chan, i always kinda figured you were crazy anyway... although i mean the good kind, not the pyschotic kind...
Roadside Dryer chapter 1 . 10/28/2003
Good poem makes me think (scary thought thinking! On a school night with no homework!)
activist59 chapter 1 . 10/28/2003
wow. that is really good. so fin is real? Your not going insane. At least I think your not. towards the end of our walk home you seemed fine but when we were by the school you seemed truly insane. But I don't mind! This is a reall good poem though.

gummy
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 10/28/2003
Expressing emotions makes you insane? Jeez, I must have been insane all of my life, then.

You NEED to express yourself. No wonder you feel insane, if you keep everything inside you all the time. It's not called insanity - it's called bottling up your emotions. It's not healthy.

You've got some minor spelling errors in here...and it's not exactly the best poem, but you expressed yourself and that is good. )

Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw
Punky Monkey chapter 1 . 10/28/2003
lol...why the hell did u pretend u were insane? Anyway good poem the short lines add to the drama. Keep writing :)