Reviews for Lost Name
Risa chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
I really enjoyed reading this. You did a really nice job with the rhyme scheme and the near ryhmes are pretty cool. It really makes you think. This poem...Can I make a song out of it? I really really like this one!
Tenchi Masaki chapter 1 . 10/28/2003
Absolutly amazing. I love the last 4 lines. sure brilance. I envy they way you get your emotion into your poems and yet maintain a rhyme to it. Congrads on an excelent poem.