|Reviews for Starwarrior Saga|
| The Mumbling Sage chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
Pardon any choppiness, I'm reviewing as I go...
Okay, already in the first paragraph there are a few places where tenses don't agree, so the whole thing is very confusing. '...it looked so much comforting to behold from behind the windshield' is the example I'm thinking of.
Definatly an interesting beginning. A little humerous, but that's probably how it's supposed to be. Also, Brendan has real emotion and goals (dating Kathrine), which makes his character much more real.
The only thing I'm a little confused about (and it may be a little nit-picky) is why the aliens speak English.
| Paul B. Spence chapter 1 . 10/29/2003
Okay, first a question...I this supposed to be funny. I thought it was, but...
I like it. I is well written. The way you spead the visual details through the story is good.
I think the primary comedic element is the language the aliens use. That and silly details like a spaceship having a broken belt.