Reviews for Starwarrior Saga
The Mumbling Sage chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
Pardon any choppiness, I'm reviewing as I go...

Okay, already in the first paragraph there are a few places where tenses don't agree, so the whole thing is very confusing. ' looked so much comforting to behold from behind the windshield' is the example I'm thinking of.

Definatly an interesting beginning. A little humerous, but that's probably how it's supposed to be. Also, Brendan has real emotion and goals (dating Kathrine), which makes his character much more real.

The only thing I'm a little confused about (and it may be a little nit-picky) is why the aliens speak English.
Paul B. Spence chapter 1 . 10/29/2003
Okay, first a question...I this supposed to be funny. I thought it was, but...

I like it. I is well written. The way you spead the visual details through the story is good.

I think the primary comedic element is the language the aliens use. That and silly details like a spaceship having a broken belt.