|Reviews for Chocolate|
| Mia Haider chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
m...chocolate. *stomach growls* T_T ok i must avoid poems about food late at night. its super!
| Winged One1 chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
M...chocolate...nothing else to say...I love this poem!
| xanya chapter 1 . 12/6/2003
hahah, I love chocolate so much so I can definitely see where you're coming from. This was great... really makes me wanna eat a lot of chocolate right now. I kinda have an addiction too. A big addiction, you might say. Have you heard the song 'Savoy Truffle' by the Beatles? It's kinda like this, all about chocolate. Anyway, great poem!
| Birdaloo chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
yum! GIMME GIMME! *wink wink*
| MauledBarbie chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
i like the way you have used exqusite and descriptive words to portray the exqusitness ... is that even a word (and yes i know im repeating myself). But it is quite a bit long - i think it looses it in the last stanzas. You can still say what you want to say in a cut-down version i think. good work - keep writing!
| IHJ chapter 1 . 11/5/2003
*shaking head* I will always envy the seeming ease you have of rhyming. Mine always seem forced. (Well, it was only one poem, so...*shrug*)
A bit flowery written, somewhat like an ode, but brings to mind the movie "Chocolat". Hm... *sigh* Too bad I'm fasting! It definitely shows your love of chocolate.
| Cirien Phoenix chapter 1 . 11/2/2003
Oh, yum... I'm gonna go dig through my Halloween candy now... MUST HAVE CHOCOLATE! Need chocolate! You made me hungry! Great poem!
Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
| K. Evenstar chapter 1 . 10/29/2003
OK, I'm going off to the shop to but some lovely choccie now - your poem's giving me chocolate cravings.
From your fellow chocoholic