Reviews for I Suffer for You
rose chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
u sound happy here! umm, a litle better next time! try better i saw other poems that were better! i know u can write!
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 10/30/2003

Have you completely ignored what I wrote to you?

That annoys me, greatly, since I spent a good ten minutes writing down all I told you last time I reviewed you.

Where. Is. The. Imagery?

This poem sounds almost HAPPY. WHY ARE YOU HAPPY ABOUT SUFFERING? Why the exclaimation points? Why?

I don't understand. You are not writing poetry. You are speaking. This doesn't sound like a poem - it sounds like you're just talking, as I have said before.

Why aren't you listening? I've given you the best advice I can offer.

I am going to keep reviewing you. Why? Because I want you to get better. You have so much potential! Why do you keep disappointing me everytime I click on a piece of your writing?

Practice what I told you. I'm off to review your other piece you upoloaded.

~Namir Swiftpaw