Wow!

Such intense and complete imagery with so few words.

Good work...

Keep writing

me likes... a tinge morbid, i must admit, but a god tinge... i like the imagry though, its nice...well not nice in the normal sense, but nice as in well done... yeah, you know what im trying to say...

Keep it up!

This is really sad. With the kind of lit teacher I have I would never share this, (she smiles and is too happy for her own good!)