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Aw such a sweet story!

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Aw cute story. I'm glad that Trent & Nat were able to work out everything in the end, and it was a kind of intimate touch that Nat's mother helped out quite a bit in their relationship as well. So did Nat return to being the Buffalo's anchor, or did she stay as Boston's?

One scene that I think you should have added was when Nat first asked Trent if she could interview him, but he turned it down. Since he mentioned that that was when he first became interested/fell in love with her, I think that might have been an important scene to actually play out for the readers.

I love hockey! Haha. This was a cutee story :) Seeing Trent & Nat together makes me all giddy ;) Haha. Keep writing! I hope to read more by you soon.

- Alyssa

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BAHAHAHAHA.

a PROPOSAL.

:)

sure wasn't expecting that this early in da story! :D

:)

i always like it when the boyfriend/fiance cheats on them ... it gives them an excuse to break up with them and move on to the next guy. :)

otherwise i don't like reading em, coz girls who have a guy, and yet like another ... tis liek cheating in my opinion. :)

did that make sense?

meh

like this so far. very cute. but the chapters are kinda short ... but meh. :)

Wow, that was an awesome story, I loved it. The writing was confident, I didn't notice any grammar/spelling mistakes, and it was truly a happy story. It was really good. I especially love the last line in the last chapter. That was really sweet. Great job!

nice story. very different from the other sports story in FPC. (:

Awesome!

aw how sweet, they got married! great story, cya later ~ luv Alenor.

Five stars. Definitely.

hehe... expect the unexpected in unexpected times.. lovely chap, love the story

Normally I'm not a big fan of sports stories, but this one's cute. And it sounds like you really know what you're talking about, which makes it a lot more fun to read.

Yay Trent, I was really woried he'd messed it all up for a bit there. Glad to see he and Natalie got together. Squee! _ Thanks for a fun read.

Aw... The fact that I love the name Trent only makes me like this story more. It's so cute... Evil Rebecca, I just KNOW she's gonna try to screw things up. *scowls*

Just thinking, wouldn't Nat know who the players were and what they looked like? You said she had written for them for a while, and I would imagine that she had seen them play...Just random thoughts, this story is v. good!

AH! I absolutely LOVE your story! and its kind of funny because when i read that Boston would play Tampa... oh i got mad. I was all for Calgary to win the cup this year but no the stinky lightning beat us to it! argh! lol anyways, this is such a great story. i love hockey and i love romance stories, so of course i love your story.