Reviews for Cycles
Radical Chic chapter 1 . 10/31/2003
That was awesome. I really, really, like it. It reminds me of some of my stuff (I don't know if they're posted, though). I like the repitition. My only suggestion is to find some stanza division, since it is a rather long poem. It would help the reader to focus on the ideas, instead of it running all together.
Sweet Sakura Curls chapter 1 . 10/29/2003
Wow. I really like it. Great poem.
Porphyrophobic Grape chapter 1 . 10/29/2003
this is really good, i love the point, it flows really well and has a way of being obvious with out really being ovious, if that makes since, lets just day its great :)