|Reviews for The Ultramodern Corporation|
| Reader chapter 10 . 12/2/2009
I love that all your characters are the right touch of phsycotic
| Sally-andersonn chapter 10 . 10/11/2005
5 Newtons? That is a hell of a lot of pressure. I am going to spend the rest of my life with my mouth closed!
| Sally-andersonn chapter 7 . 10/11/2005
This story has so much information crammed into it. I'm saying ti was good.
| Sally-andersonn chapter 6 . 10/11/2005
Great thoughtful chapter. Very peaceful. I really like it.
| Sally-andersonn chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
This is reall interesting. Great characters.
| IntentionallyLeftBlank chapter 36 . 6/8/2005
...hm...it's ok... the plot excellent, although it's kind of farsically dystopian...?
...i dislike the characters, though... they're stale. dead. robotic. you change their views a little too dramatically, and it disrupts story flow.
...other than that, it was pretty good.
| Velvet Valentine chapter 3 . 2/7/2004
I'm only on Chapter Three, but I really like this so far. I like your style. And I will keep reading!
| The Great Muses chapter 36 . 1/23/2004
That, i guess, is a better conc. than the other chapter that i just reviewed.
Over all, i think that this was a good story ... wound together very well. On a scale of one to ten, i give it a nine and a half. A well written story, i enjoyed reading it and the philosophy connected with it has taught me an important lesson. Thankyou
| The Great Muses chapter 35 . 1/23/2004
This would make a good conclusion, but i see there's another chapter...
| The Great Muses chapter 34 . 1/23/2004
Okay, scary ... but ok.
| The Great Muses chapter 33 . 1/23/2004
Omg, what is happening? Okay, reality bites, but why so hard?
| The Great Muses chapter 32 . 1/23/2004
Okay, the prologue all comes into place now ... i like it alot!
| The Great Muses chapter 31 . 1/23/2004
This is unusual, but very interesting ... i'm to read more
| The Great Muses chapter 28 . 1/23/2004
Okay, now. Stephen is SO disturbed that this isn't funny ...
| The Great Muses chapter 27 . 1/23/2004
Oh ... the plot really thickens now!