I love that all your characters are the right touch of phsycotic

5 Newtons? That is a hell of a lot of pressure. I am going to spend the rest of my life with my mouth closed!

This story has so much information crammed into it. I'm saying ti was good.

Great thoughtful chapter. Very peaceful. I really like it.

This is reall interesting. Great characters.

...hm...it's ok... the plot excellent, although it's kind of farsically dystopian...?

...i dislike the characters, though... they're stale. dead. robotic. you change their views a little too dramatically, and it disrupts story flow.

...other than that, it was pretty good.

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I'm only on Chapter Three, but I really like this so far. I like your style. And I will keep reading!

That, i guess, is a better conc. than the other chapter that i just reviewed.
Over all, i think that this was a good story ... wound together very well. On a scale of one to ten, i give it a nine and a half. A well written story, i enjoyed reading it and the philosophy connected with it has taught me an important lesson. Thankyou

This would make a good conclusion, but i see there's another chapter...

Okay, scary ... but ok.

Omg, what is happening? Okay, reality bites, but why so hard?

Okay, the prologue all comes into place now ... i like it alot!

This is unusual, but very interesting ... i'm to read more

Okay, now. Stephen is SO disturbed that this isn't funny ...

Oh ... the plot really thickens now!