Reviews for Life and Me
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
Can't you see I'm busy taking bricks out of the wall
Used for stepping stones to climb out from this hole
I love that attitude. Well done.
BoweS chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
This was a nice piece. I liked how it all rhymed and the rhythn was great! Wish you well for the future.
Lisa A. M chapter 1 . 2/6/2004
Hm. I really like the rythem of this stroy, but my head's clouded with tiredness and I didn't get the full meaning. Life in general I guess. I really like this one too. The way you depict each thing is really good.
phthalo blue chapter 1 . 11/6/2003
Just how do you manage to make beautiful and realistic poems with great rhymes? I loved the end of this poem.
Static Black chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
Nice work if I must say. I loved the ending and the work structure was wonderful. Um, you really did a great job. The only thing I found wrong in your poetry is that it seemed to go on and on and on and not really flow in some parts. Maybe you could work on that a bit? But otherwise it was a very unique poem. I wish you well in future writings.