Cool. This story is too good to have only one review! Sheesh! Oh well. I like it! Ambrose sort of reminds me of um... the guy Orlando Bloom plays as in Pirates of the Carribean. (I just watched LOTR, So sue me! ) Nice beginning. Adithe sounds... intimidating. hehe, I'll read the rest later, I gotta do me homework lol. Nice start tho!

o come on! i finally finished readin ths n theres STILL more? lol update it soon please! lylas late

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