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| Eleanor Gibson chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
Well, I liked the 'Truth About FP' so I decided to check out some of your other stuff. Title suggestions...well I'll get back to it after some comments on the content (if I can think of a title...). Nice descriptions and comparisions, all gave the reader a sense of what you wished to tell. Theme was good, it's relatable, and easy to pick up on. So yes, I did like this poem...and I'm done rambling...now if you actually bothered to read this, I'm surprised, since it's really just my attempt to give a well-rounded review...that's not so well rounded. Anyhow, title suggestions...maybe 'Days and Dreams'...or...'Days to Nights'...'When all else feels the same'...'Dream door'...'Illusions or Reality'...'Illusions to Reality'...ok...so I'm not happy with any of those suggestions...maybe you'll find something you like...sorry I'm not much help,-Rae
| QueenRemge13 chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
I liked it, I think maybe if you like it, it should be called 'Day of days'? Well I liked it and that's all that counts! :-D
| Nerf chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
i can really relate. Well done!
I like the idea of doors, gd imagery.
(U hav so many new poems! i will get on that):)
| Brandy Bear chapter 1 . 11/2/2003
this is a good poem i know i have sat here for like 5 min trying to thik of a title and my mind draws a blank um... maybe somthing like My reality or not it is all i have been able to come up with
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
I cant think of a good title altho I love the poem! great descriptions!