Reviews for Be Hit and Hold On
Will Klemm chapter 1 . 12/2/2003
i enjoy the poeticness of this poem. esp. the last line "nothing's worth the salt in your tears."
jsullins chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
that was really good... i really liked it. thanks for reviewing my poems... i dont get that many reviews.. *tear* lol yea... keep writing... your work is great!

-Niniane, Lady of the Lake-
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 11/10/2003
Great stuff, and excellent imagery! But what else is new? :-). Keep it up!
Nerf chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
Wow! i reli reli love this, i think it mite b my favourite of urs (or one of)

Well done!

simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
interesting format & it doesnt suck I like it especially the ending!
Native Tongue chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
I tend to automatically stray away from any typical 'please read this even though I think it sucks' posts. But I gave this one a chance, and I haven't regretted it. I like the overall message underlying this piece. With a few edits here and there, this could turn out to be a great piece of work.

-Black Thought
Empty Inside chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
i like it... its deep