Reviews for Blood Drips Slowly Down
Rozzy chapter 1 . 3/30/2004
i liked this a lot, you used conflicting styles, which i thought worked very well. "breaking bones and ripping skin / puddles from all the gore/ swimmings fun so go dive in!" was excellent in its speed and use of imagenery, description and colloquial tones. the last line was beautiful, very startling, surpirising, adds a wonderful level of mystery.
really nice poem.
Big Thug chapter 1 . 3/26/2004
Very bloody, but very you. You should really sell it to Rob Zombie and make a movie out of it, it'd be pretty funny to see it on the big screen.
Beatle Babe chapter 1 . 10/31/2003
Oh. A lurvely goth poem...
Raquel chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
"Maggots squirm through the empty vessal" ... wow thats nice ... where do u come up w/ this stuff ?
Kalty chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
Carilone i think u r one crazy ass fucken person to write this i know ur crazy and shit but god dame this one takes the cakes and all other food
allison chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
I am a fraid, very afraid. Hmm, very erm, bloody, good imagery tho, even if its kinda gross. Another good poem, although, well, I prefer less blood on my quill.