this was a really nice poem. i can really relate to it. nice work.

That was awesome! I especially like the stanza:

His number one dream

Is for there to come a day

Where being antisocial is

Socially okay

That is great. The poem reads smoothly except toward the end, and subject is awesome. I don't know what else to say except that I really felt like I was watching a story as I read. Keep writing!