|Reviews for Hiding|
| chaoticspecter chapter 1 . 10/31/2003
this was a really nice poem. i can really relate to it. nice work.
| Radical Chic chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
That was awesome! I especially like the stanza:
His number one dream
Is for there to come a day
Where being antisocial is
That is great. The poem reads smoothly except toward the end, and subject is awesome. I don't know what else to say except that I really felt like I was watching a story as I read. Keep writing!