Reviews for Queen of Hearts
Rhiannon Merdon chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
For random thoughts, this is pretty good! Thanks for reviewing my story.
Creepy McSteezerson chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
Very interesting concept. I really liked it. Maybe you can check out some of my earlier works. They're a lot better than the new stuff. Some suggestions of mine are "Stairway to Hell" and "Suicide".
daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
*laughs* Nicely done. I really love the personification.
I think my favorite line is: "She smirks slightly, the Queen of Hearts. She's won, and they haven't a clue"
It was a great way to end the poem. Awesome job!
Tanzonite Black chapter 1 . 2/25/2004
Line 3: "This entertains the Queen of Heats," you're missing an "r" in Hearts. That being said...I never want to play poker against you if this is your thought process during it.
Long Live the Losers chapter 1 . 1/15/2004
I like this. It's a pleasant mixture of silly and bittersweet, and certainly puts a new spin on my games of solitaire..My only criticism is with the line "Cardsharps with an Ace up their sleeve." To be grammatically correct, it should probably read, "Cardsharps with Aces up their sleeves." Very cool poem, though.