Thank you! A reviewer who looked at the words beneith 'Submit Review'! I always need help with my stories. And Ok...hm. It's a bit difficult to describle Phil and Christian...Jon and Lauren not so much. By now everyone will be teasing Phil about the book 'The Cay' being wrong and when he gets dropped off on a desserted island. Ha ha...anyway thankies for the review I will work on longer posts! Just remember. On the island I have to use flashlight batteries sparingly so may not have a lot of time to write. I get days off every eight days. THis is why the eighth day post is longer than the rest.

Cute story. I like how it's a journal. I think that you should make this longer. Up to the point where you get off the island.

If you decide to do that I would make the entires a bit longer just so you can describe how your island is, describe the various people that you talk about, and how you are all coping.

Great story. Want more...