aw. I liked it alot, you know? :o)

Thank you for writing this! It inspires me to look ahead to the future! Speaking of which, I have a quote for you!
"Turn your face to the sun and let the shadows fall behind you."

I really liked the other peom better! But this one is good too!

That was excellent! I really, really loved it! A great message with vivid wording... awesome first poem.