Reviews for Could Be Paradise
Sweets5236 chapter 23 . 5/15/2013
I wasn't gonna review till the end but I just have to say that it's awesome how Louis decided to call the main desk and tell some random stranger his story, it's pretty much hilarious :)
dreeming chapter 34 . 2/27/2013
I can't even tell you how much I loved this. Everytime I tried to assume what would happen next would end up being some cliched, predictable situation, you went ahead and surprised me yet again. Definitely something I'd read more than once.
F.H.W chapter 34 . 11/17/2012
Oh i loved it! it didnt make sense half the time but the fluff is soo cute
And could you use like stuff to signal the end of one scene? Like in the second last chapter, before the party? A break should be in place so readers dont get confused. Well i certainly did.
Characters are so flawed, so realistic, so awesomely portrayed. I cried and laughed at some points and even 'oohed' and 'aahed'. Therefore I think this was a great story
je ne veux pas travailler chapter 34 . 12/11/2011
This is the best story I've read on this site to date-and I've read quite a bit. Actually, I've read this story a number of times-and I've picked up new details every time. The characters are exaggerated, but so believable and so perfectly imperfect. I love the tone of the story, the humour, the fighting. I love Louis and Macy...usually I find I really hate most female characters in the story for being so vapid and the supporting characters are usually more annoying than anything, but there was not one character I hated (except Kurt of course.)I usually hate the manwhore types like Dane, but I found he added extra comic relief. I could go on and on about how much I love this but I will refrain for now lol. I sincerely hope you write more!
Jaxer-Remmington Ferad chapter 34 . 3/19/2011
After stumbling upon this story, I couldn't even stop to take a break-because this was so well written and interesting that I just had to read it to the very end. I love the growth you see in the characters, especially Lou, and the bits of crude humor here and there. But I gotta admit, Dane was one of my favorite supporting characters; mostly for his simple minded arrogance and funny remarks that keep the conversations he has with the other characters flowing.

Great story, awesome writing, and epic plotline. This totally deserves so many reviews :]
I Murder on Impulse chapter 34 . 8/24/2010
HAha I love this story!

xx

Ali
calasin chapter 34 . 5/9/2010
ohmygod.

i LOVED this. O really, really loved it.

and i'm in love with louis. so..erm, i was wondering, does he happen to have an identical twin...that you know...no one knows about? because yeah...i'd love to have a louis all to myself xD

anyway, great story, the plot was amazing, i actually cried a little when they separated...but i'm a big crybaby so... P

you're an awesome writer! D
bubublacz chapter 34 . 4/26/2010
Aw... This is such a sweet story. Although it's cliche, I still find myself guessing what would happen next. I think that the characters were really portrayed well and that they weren't overlapping each other. I love their chemistry too. I also want Dane, and I don't like Nora. :)!
E. M. Isle chapter 34 . 3/6/2010
ok, so i read this story some weeks ago and i wanted to write you a long review. i didn't do it right away, but i haven't had time to to do it since, not that i have time now, but i thought i'd do it quick so i won't forget everything i wanted to tell you.

so, i love love love love this story. really. it's just stories like "could be paradise" that make me happy. those are my favourites. i just love them. i think your story isn't perfect, but that makes it more interesting. i love your main characters. i really do. lou and macy are truly unique and special, and i love that about characters. they have their faults and that's what's making it real and raw. love that.

ok, if i reviewed earlier i would have been able to think up more things to tell you, but i can't think of anything more at the moment. i'm probably going to read it again soon, and then i will concentrate a little bit better on everything, because i will hopefully have more time. great, so, keep up the good work, e. m. isle
maiff chapter 34 . 11/2/2009
Well written!

Man, you don't know how much addicted I got to this story. It was really amazing! The characters and their dialogs were alive. I also like Louis though I'm not really a fan of childish, temperamental blonds. Macy and Louis were so cute together!

The flow of the story isn't too slow or fast for my liking. It seemed real... their personalities, thoughts, actions.

I don't know what to say anymore. You're simply amazing! You've inspired me. :D

Kudos!
lrstar123 chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
I really like this story! It's great. There is an interesting plotline and fun dialogue. Keep writing!
Bluecoco100 chapter 34 . 9/7/2009
this was a great story i loved it. It was funny, cute, and adorable!
Elle Winters 9 chapter 23 . 4/23/2009
oh wow that was surprisingly cute at the end.

sorry. i know i havn't reviewed to this story before and i'm onyl suddenly doing so now, but just so you know I like this story. The start didn't seem very intersting, but then I don't know, your story evokes emotions and a lot fo the time they contradict, it makes me feel confused, emotionally confused, like your characters are, not confused as in no idea what your talking about confused.
slee5133 chapter 34 . 3/9/2009
aw. loved this story. louis is so frikin cute. i love that he's not the stereotypical macho man. :D
Frozen.by.Sloth chapter 34 . 1/27/2009
whoa.

I really, really enjoyed reading this story.

It's been an amazing experience.

It was rather sweet and funny, could make me somber and think and was plain entertaining. There were parts that seemed to be a bit too drawn, or none-too-perfect parts, but every part of it, I'm glad to have read.

The characters were really different than what we come across usually, and I loved seeing them find themselves, the different aspects of their lives and how peoples' opinions on you depend on the smallest things.

I loved the details like his shades, and his relationship with Jodie-wodie (Jodie-wodie, seriously? lol) was damn amazing ;)

Oh, and their last exchange was really sweet. Corny, as you said, maybe, but really sweet.

Thank you for sharing.

I'm really glad I read this.
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