Reviews for Brain Overload
sadistic punk x chapter 1 . 3/3/2004
hey, i agree with what you're saying in this poem. i can't log in right now but i thought i'd tell you this was very well written.
Nebulous Fate chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
This is done very well! This part I liked this most:
"After death, is there even a soul?
Confused why all these thoughts are here,
Ovulating through MY overactive mind,
Sitting here, no answers, brain overload."
That really gets to me. Oh how true that is...
LiquidGenesis chapter 1 . 11/2/2003
Very true, but I don't think we're higher than anything and that we just fool ourselves into thinking that we are. Good point to the poem and good use of objects. The ending is nicely done, since it makes the poem go around by repeating the beginning.

NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDolly chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
Ya I like D

very.. deep?

hehe... I dont know what the word is I'm thinking of...

but its good P :)