Reviews for Paper Cranes
creatureofnite chapter 1 . 11/1/2003

You've chosen the perfect word for each purpose that you need for each word where you have a word.

I know what I mean.

It's good.

I'd put my favourite bit here, but it's all a giant favourite bit.

Go you!
Eternity's Secret chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
Woah! This is cool! I like the last stanza.

"You gave her wings

Then flew away...

You never taught her how."

That was cool.
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