|Reviews for Paper Cranes|
| creatureofnite chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
You've chosen the perfect word for each purpose that you need for each word where you have a word.
I know what I mean.
I'd put my favourite bit here, but it's all a giant favourite bit.
| Eternity's Secret chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
Woah! This is cool! I like the last stanza.
"You gave her wings
Then flew away...
You never taught her how."
That was cool.