|Reviews for Insert Name Here|
| THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
to the point! Someone is going to get a "wake up call"Great job. I like the title.
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
Taken for granted,
Like a piece of land,
A privilege owed,
To those God has deigned,
To have us how-tow,
Without heart's know-how,
Disdain unbinds us,
From haughty bondage,
Would cripple frail soul,
And leave us empty.
p.s. So much truth in your poem,—it hurts to read it. m
| Sweet-Child03 chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
I love this poem. You put a lot of feeling into it.
| Punky Monkey chapter 1 . 11/4/2003
Good poem. I have a few 'mates' like this. Suddenly one day we'll get talking again after i've been upset they've lost interest and they'll be like 'i miss the times we spent together' 'its not good that we havent talked properly for ages' and that'll carry on for a couple of weeks. Then the cycle will happen again. i really liked the ending, sudden. just like you ending the off and on friendship with him.
| EternalBlackRose-85 chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
Wow, I can actually relate to this. I used to have a friend that treated me like a door mat. I really loved this piece.
| Ian chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
This is very powerful, I like it.