Reviews for I Can't
godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
Oh honey...*hugs* yes I could see you crying as you wrote this. I wanted to cry, too, because I can totally relate...ah...break-ups are the worst. *offers hot chocolate*
~lyv
SweetGrape chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
Ouch.

Obvious sobbing, but determined to hide it and seem stronger than you feel.

Vivid pain- you really can see the tears if not actually feel them as your heart breaks- this just seemed like incredibly strong, intense emotions to me.

And you can't do waht you did last time, so what can you do?

All you can think of is hiding it and not letting them realise your pain beacuse it's none of their business and it's so important to not let them know how it has affected you.
lauralie chapter 1 . 11/18/2003
touching...i like it

i think many of us have had this feeling a time or two

great work
not sure yet chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
very straight forward and sad, muchly like it, intense and sad, nicely done
glitterjewele chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
*gulp* i almost cried. seriously, i'm all choked up right now, the end of it . . . *sniffle* the despair just kind of sneaked its way into my heart, and i honestly don't think it's because i know the story behind the poem; truly i think it's the words themselves. this part:

you were the one i turned to when

i felt this way before

~*chills* seriously, that just did me in, and then

because you can't know

you can't know

you can never know

~that one *sounded* like uncontrollable sobs as i read it, VERY powerful piece of poetry chica, i like it a LOT.
Taelianessa chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
Very, very, very well done. I can't even begin to imagine how many times I've felt like that.