Reviews for Crossroads
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
That was a real tough desicion indeed! I can only take my driving license end of this year. . I wish I could do well like you did. Hehe, cute story. This is going into my fav. list.
eupseudes chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
A very vivid essay, using an false extended metaphor and very descriptive sentences in order to convey your meanings. The suspense that you leave the reader in is very interesting too, not revealing that this door is physical, not metaphorical at the very end. I trust that this is from an actual experience from yourself, because it show accurately shows a different viewpoint from other people when driving the car for the first time.

You certainly seem to have put some heavy thought into this essay and I found it quite interesting. Welcome to Fictionpress. I hope to see more writing from you.