Reviews for White Flag |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It ended! Will there be a sequel? Probably not...but I loved every break-up-get-back-together minute of it. Wonderful story, as I've probably stated before. I'm glad that you came back to life and updated and finished it. And Riley's pregnant! That's a very cute, happily ever after ending. Awesome job. I can't wait to see what you'll write in the future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow i was so surprised that there was a NSYNC fanfic on here. newayz love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So is it all over now? Wow, what a great ride. What was it, three years of you writing this story? If it's over, thank you for finishing it. I've thoroughly enjoyed your writing and your story. Hope you write something new soon! |
![]() ![]() I love your story. I just read it from start to finish and i love it. You need to update soon! I don't understand why not to many people have reviewed your story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alright so I'm not allowed to review a chapter twice, so I just picked a random one to write you in. I LOVE your story. You seriously have no idea how much. What I find really sad is how many reviews you've received compared to the amount of chapters written. I believe your story deserves way more credit than that. Not too sure where you've gone the last 3-4 months. I've actually been anxiously waiting for an update, and check every week to see if you put anything up. But. . . you have not. You've come so far with this story and it looks like it's almost done. It would be such a shame if you abandonned it with only a few chapters left! Alright, my review is getting a little bit too long. I'll leave now, but I just wanted you to know that I'll be waiting for your update :) While trying not to beg... PLEASE UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! You finally updated! I have been waiting around for months, months I tell ya! Well, it was just as good as ever, maybe even better. I can't help but want to read more. So much has happened! Try not to take too long on the next update. I know we're all busy, but this story is definitely my favourite. Please keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, great chapter. Sorry for the delayed review. I read it the day you uploaded it, but have been so busy lately I've been putting it off. Of course, it's just as good as ever. Keep it up, and don't leave the story unfinished (please!). I look forward to the next chapter. Your faithful reader, moi |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa whoa whoa! I'm so completely totally confused. Where did the baby come into the story? Did I just skip over something and miss it, or what? Liz is the girl that went on tour with the band and ended up dating JC right? Urgh, so confused. Loved the part with Justin and Meg, it was adorable and great. Don't let Riley break up with JC! I mean, I like Benji and all, but it took so long for her and JC to get together and you're breaking them up? How fair is that? :( Poo. I've been waiting for you to update for so long, wow was it ever long. You didn't disappoint, which was awesome. How many more chapters are left? Seriously help me with the whole Liz/Rory/JC thing, I'm totally confused. Yeah, anyways, it was great and I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, by the way, I've added this to one of my fav stories, which you probably know already... :): |
![]() ![]() ![]() When are you going to update your story? |
![]() ![]() Hey I've just finished reading your story from the beginning, and I have to say it's awesome.. Update! It's been so long since the last chapter, have you stopped writing? |
![]() ![]() Yes, I know I reviewed your story before but I just LOVE it! Update some more, please! It's awesome, and I'd love to find out what happens next Peace :) |
![]() ![]() I love your story. Some of it is a little bit unrealistic (NSYNC still being together as a band), but it's really good. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jecca, thanks for reviewing. I do have parts in the story where it states who's perspective it is, but I can' seem to get the stories to upload where those parts are bolded, but they are there it says "thoughts:" If you read the story through you'll see it! Thanks again, sorry it's so confusing a lot of my story got messed up grammatically in upload too! |
![]() ![]() its pretty good, but how you change perspectives without warning is confusing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() keep going please! this story rocks! |