Reviews for Broken Ballerina
Soviet chapter 1 . 9/17/2004
Good imagry on the most part... however the flow was not too good in my opinion
Emerald Lynne Stonne chapter 1 . 1/22/2004
Very nice poem. I especially liked the lines Daddy's little dancer
Has quite a little secret and Daddy hasn't got a little dancer anymore
What he's a broken ballerina! GREAT JOB! Please keep writing because I love your work *blushes and wishes she was a better writer* lol
Dawn of Fire chapter 1 . 12/27/2003
Are you kidding me? You write beautifully! Your summaries don't do you justice...that's the only complaint i have :-P
Wind Blown Hair chapter 1 . 11/10/2003
Wow. This was quite beautiful. I loved the last stanza. Very good. I liked the potrayal of innocence to well, the loss of innocence. Nice one!
creatureofnite chapter 1 . 11/6/2003
Nice analogy.
mrbubblesandme chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
That was really good. Your talented.
pleasecometrue chapter 1 . 11/2/2003
Great write!