Reviews for A Generation of Desperate Pronouns
grey spirit chapter 1 . 11/4/2003
*clings* Last Fortress! wah! D I really have to say I love the imagery, especially in part I. That's the most vivid for me.

Since the rest of the poem is so strong, I'd have to say part II is the weakest part because the imagery and message combined is not as clear as the other two. But still, I love it.

The fighting imagery in those last two stanzas is what really gets me though. A nice strong finish. You are wonderful darling.

Grey Spirit
Kimi-sama chapter 1 . 11/2/2003
Nice. I found some random parts confusing hwen I tried to examine it more closely but nearly all poetry is like that for me. The feeling I go from all the words put and blurred together is what counts for me and that was a good one. Well, not exactly good, I mean this was kind of bitter sweet but you know it was good.
Winterfax chapter 1 . 11/2/2003
Absolutely amazing! Your way with words is wonderful. Great job!
I C U 2 chapter 1 . 11/2/2003
that was a very nice poem, I really liked it