|Reviews for Do You Remember Me?|
| skarpiagirl chapter 5 . 6/8/2010
great story!i liked it. Poor Erin with her memory loss..thats really difficult to cope with.. ):
| J. Rea chapter 5 . 7/21/2006
That was really good. You've done a good job at telling a wonderful tale.
| Lady Katreina chapter 5 . 4/22/2006
How. How and why?That was amazingly thank you I suppose.
| Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 5 . 3/20/2005
Aw man that ending was so sad. Brilliant, but sad. I am glad you didnt have a great joyous happy ending in some ways though because everyone has happy endings. I love how you used alot of different ideals throughout this peice. It was a nice write. I enjoyed reading it. Great piece.
| marinawings chapter 5 . 6/8/2004
aw... that was so sad, but so beautiful! oh my gosh! i didn't even realize there was another chapter. what a lovely, bittersweet tale. wow.
| marinawings chapter 4 . 6/8/2004
ah! this is awful! is mark dead? what is erin going to do? please continue!
| marinawings chapter 3 . 6/8/2004
wow! this is awesome! i just love mark! and i love the way you handle the romances in your story. you must be gifted with that or something.
| marinawings chapter 2 . 6/8/2004
ah! the forbidden garden! i love it! and the hint of a forbidden romance... awesome!
| marinawings chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
wow. once again, your stories bowl me over! this is so good. i am intrigued. it's quite spiffy. and i am curious as to who wants the princess to remember them. hmm... i must read more!
| Grey-eyed-dream-chaser chapter 1 . 12/30/2003
Wow...very good story. There were a few grammatical errors, especially in the change of past, present, and future tense, and some of the descriptions were weak compared to others, but on the whole, this was good.
| Grey Falcon chapter 1 . 11/4/2003
Story updated...well, I think I solved the 'groom' problem. I know the word is wrong, but I never had anyone to tell me about it before. Thanks!
The usage of the name 'Lord Byron' is partly my fault - the name just pops up into my head and I used it without thinking, and it's too late to replace it after I finished the story. It's written in 2001 anyway.
| Synparity chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
I started to read, but I'm finding it difficult to pay attention... The use of 'groom' throws me. A groom belongs in the stables, not serving a princess as their personal servant/et al. I suggest you change 'groom' to 'butler' unless you mean to insinuate that Erin is a horse.
The story looks really interesting, however, so hopefully you can change that one teeny thing. I'm looking forward to reading.
| Satar chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
wow that was really good,but so sad! wish the ending would be a bit happier but that would kinda ruin the story,well anyways, loved your story!
| IHJ chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
There were several times during the story that I was jarred from the spell you had woven. I have to say Lord Byron (why did you name that evil man after a poet?) use of the word "bastard" was one of them instances. The story sometimes drags at some points, too, but...the ending is so... *sigh* So sorrowful she forgot Mark again.