Reviews for A crimson equation for a new generation
The Illiterate Poet chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
I love this poem it is great, it describes what the world is like, excelent poem.
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
I hope more peopple read this. It really makes the reader think. The title was well chosen for this.

Heart of the Sword
Getuie chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
There are so many lines in this poem that are quote-worthy.

"He thinks differently,

He looks weird

'Bang', not he's gone"

"In war there can be no winner"

and those last five lines... wow

This poem reminded me of te song 'The voice'. I know it was first a big Australian hit by a male artist I can't remember and then Rebecca St. James also took it... but yeah... made me think of that...

Great work
havocsharbinger chapter 1 . 11/4/2003
Has not every generation learned the art of war, so to speak? Yes, it may be dissappointing, however, it is also inevitable - this government wants this and hates that, and the other government hates the first mentioned government. The result? WAR! We hate each other and the masses will never learn peace, because to get what we want can come a coast. We're narrow minded and unaccpeting, and the next generation will be as well, sadly. An exceptional poem by the way, and yes, no one ever wins, not even if we thrived under an omnipotent state, because everyone has their own personal opinion.