Reviews for Loyalties Forgotten
Koeryn chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
People break the laws or make new laws to get around every(switch for being) account(able) for there(re to ier) actions.
Ghost in the Machine chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
"People break the laws or make new laws to get around every account for there actions."

Rewrite this sentence. I'm fairly sure 'there' should be 'their'. But even with that change, it still doesn't sound right.