Reviews for Raspberry Candles
Taka and Keichirou chapter 1 . 12/3/2003
okay...i like the raspberry candles because it gives a different imagery, but then the diction used for the poem is kind of repetitive...i dont know what it is but there's a certain lack of emotions...i don't know...just something...
like someone watching and not doing anything...
T
Nebulous Fate chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
O_O
Disturbingly beautiful..
I'm lost for words on this one. You paint such a gothic, dark, glorious, striking visions for the reader with your words and descriptions!
I love this one! Keep up the great work!
SerAnonima chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
This is a great poem... It is very deep and full of emotion... I love the imagery... it really brings the poem to live... excellent!
laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
oh my...this sure is really nice...i really like the symbolism of the candle and the raspberry...oh and i really appreciate your review...and you like my pen name?...thanks...write more...
NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDolly chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
ooh nice, its so beautiful D

great job

Tok
Heaven Take Me Home chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
Your writing just keeps amazing me. I like how you twisted the raspberry candles in there with everything else...it gives the poem a new perspective. Never stop writing.

~*Autumn*~
Redaura chapter 1 . 11/4/2003
wow, i could really imagine that! the wind and the unflickering candle, and very nice imagrey/metaphore :)

and thanks for the review! :)