Reviews for she kisses girls
traewyq chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
This was great. I'm a bisexual and transgender man (FemaleToMale), and this is really a good expression of how we are treated. Thank you.
Smiles chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Extremely well written and very moving! n_n
pixii chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
wonderful! im in the process of coming to terms with being bisexual and things like this are SO inspiring, i literaly cried
Cari Barrymore chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
So beautiful! Made me cry :')
the-broken-clock chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
I think you did a great job with this, the only mistake I can point out is

"before we loose all our humanity"

It's "lose". I'm guessing that was just a typo though.

Nice job, I myself am bisexual and love this poem.

Skullszeyes chapter 1 . 6/15/2011

Wow. I liked that a lot! :)

Very well done.
jbarfield chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
its touching! But some lines didnt make sense. Try not to force a rhyme scheme if you have to.
Shaileigh chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
All I have to say is: Thank you for writing this. You hit the spot perfectly.
LeMaki chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
I really, really like the ending;

"And we love them all the same

You should too".

Good poem!
Adenil chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Whoa! This was really moving, in my opinion. I really liked your "refrain" too. There are a few grammatical errors, but other than that it was a well written poem. Kudos to you.
MandiGrace chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
I really like your poem, i really think that you helped express how gays/lesbians/bi/transgender teens feel. I do think that it's a bit repetative though.
ForensicFan007 chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
Wow! Powerful stuff. This is very well done in my opinion, and it's not often I find songs written about same sex relationships and transgendered people. I think that it's good that somebody isn't afraid to write about the subject. Just absolutely wonderful . . . I don't know what else to say!
vitriolicvermilion chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
I like this a lot.

I definitely agree (well, obviously..P)

They make fun of the transgenders,

and they call them freaks

They call them fashion offenders,

and say "get off the steets"

Flows really well. I love a lot (:
Kittrina chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
You don't know how happy it makes me feel when I see something like this. Thank you.
guerillero chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
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