Oh...my...god. That wad amazing. I wish you'd update);

As you havent updated this story for 7(!) years I suppose you wont finish it.

But I just wanted to say that I really think it is good :)

Update soon

Aww this is so sad...looking very promising though so keep it up and update soon!

Decent story so far. I hope the relationship with Jared develops more and I want the dad to come home. Good story - update soon!

THAT was a calm before the storm? He just like... blew up...

yes I am aware how Les Miserables is spelled . That is written like that because I liked it more and means something more as you will find out at the end of the story.

Good story, I hope you update soon

THAT BASTARD! I hope Jared kicks his ass later on for this! Damn, Nikki oughta invest in some mace, a gun, or SOMETHING!

Gads, I'm all riled up now! I love this story and you are SO on my alert list. Update ASAP!

T~H

Why'd she hug Dominic in the first place? The bastard!

Update soon... DOMINIC MUST DIE! :

CUTE! I love the ending... so sweet. Uh oh, Dominic's gonna kill her for saying that to his girlfriend... O.O...

Ack. Freaky. Dominic's gone insane... I'd probably shout "HELP!" through the phone, though then they'd think it was some prank call, or they couldn't do anything about it... : Just me being rational lol. Great chap!

Nice! I hope you continue this soon; great start.

Thankies for reviewing my short story

sad sorta but nice can't wait to see what happens update soon plz.