Reviews for Locked out of Reality
DIEDELETED chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
We all have a world, and you portraid the love for them very well!
Raquel chapter 1 . 1/23/2004
I love it! I tend to go to my own little world a lot and not reemerge for days at a time.
Raquel
Will Klemm chapter 1 . 12/9/2003
i think we all want to escape reality at times... i relate rather well to this poem and if the reader can relate, the poem works.
Delete Name chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
I've felt like that before, but I've kept heart. Something is better out there, and I just remembered that.

As for the story, how it was done and how it fit, it was very nice.

9/10
VoicesOfViolence chapter 1 . 11/4/2003
That's brilliant! Thankyou for sharing.

You're very good at rhyming...I can never get my rhyming quite right. Great description. Hey I like being locked inside my own world too!
Jordan Lyga chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
againg you write my life story, or parts of it. this reminds me of my dreams. they are all so perfect, and anything is possible, all my wishes come true. but then i wake up and its like. damn, i knew it was too good 2 b true. keep writing
Spik3y chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
Not bad.. I feel that pretty often myself. It'll be even better if you shaped the images to suit your purpose.. keep on writing!