Reviews for Black hole
Sarah Parker chapter 1 . 12/13/2003
I know how the first part goes. still hoping on the second part... but this is still a great poem. very powerful.
Punky Monkey chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
I've been there a few times! But there seems to be an absence of the helping hand on some of those occasions! O well life sucks and then we die. What a great thing to look forward too..

Good poem you're emotions were well expressed:)
LegendaryPunk29 chapter 1 . 11/7/2003
Hey, first of all, thanks for checking some of my poems! I really really appreciate it. Well, this poem can only be described in two words. GREAT and THOUGHTFUL. I really do love your poem. Thanks for sharing and also once again, thanks for checking some of my poems! Peace ouT!
pippin tomson chapter 1 . 11/6/2003
very good, it's lke a journey, and it takes you away with it. very good.
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 11/5/2003
Awesome. Very nice. I like it.


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Starlight Maiden chapter 1 . 11/5/2003
Simple but sweet. I like it.
French Poodle chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
This could use some work. It seems very mediocre to me.
Ian chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
come out, please. ME BE OUT! Great poem. I like it