OO! I love this!

It's a really good poem!

It almost reminds me of the Dark Jewels Trilogy (don't read unless you like adult books).

But it's a vampire.

I love your wording in it! And it has an atmosphere of mystery and evil, but also some love and hope... I love this type of poem!

good!:) sinister, but good!

Keep Writing!:)

CaitlinSerene

P.s.- check out my poem, "Dreams of Girls" if you get a chance and review please! thanks!